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Without You
14 October, 2003
Author: Del

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How could I live my life without you?
You make my world so bright and alive.
Please don't every leave me,
I need your love to survive.

Each day is like a rosebud,
Still glistening from the dew.
As I see the roses greet the dawn,
All my thoughts go right to you.

Without you my life would be empty,
Like a whole wide world without love.
But tonight we'll meet again, my sweet,
With the moon and the stars up above.

We need each other in every way.
And will our whole life thru.
I ask myself every day,
How could I live without you?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Marci (unknown) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 03:13 pm

Sweet

This is the sweetest poem I have read in a long time! You have written everything beautifully. I look forward to reading more....
Terrie* (65.150.170.90) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 11:45 pm

TOUCHING.....

very fine poetry........was touched by every line...you have great writing power....
Clive (63.184.1.96, 20) -- Tuesday, October 21 2003, 04:19 pm

" I Know"

Well thought, and sad to know so true, you write very well so pleasing
 
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