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Moonlight Passage
6 December, 2006
Author: Miztrebor

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There’s a woman in the sky tonight
Her face shines down as she watches.
From this, i’ve found you;
A radiated beauty through the dark,
A light through this dismal Winter.
You are the Snow,
You are the blanket,
The warmth that brightens the day.
But it is night now
And you are all alone in the field;
Cold,
Freezing cold.
I’ll be out to keep you warm,
To comfort your frigidness.
Come inside by the candlelight.
Take a wonder at the world without,
‘Cause within is not always what it seems
And neither are feelings,
Until Love finds its way;
Always through this season,
Traveling always with the Snow.
Maybe you won’t go back in Spring,
Maybe you’ll stay.
But willing I am to allow you leave
For will is not myne to take, so you can go free.
But remember i’ll be here;
Watching the woman in the sky
As she casts her light upon the white,
Gentle, cover of the year gone by.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Catyrose (128.123.85.206) -- Thursday, December 7 2006, 05:28 am

truly

a beautiful read. Thanks for sharing.
Bipedalguy (4.156.108.161) -- Wednesday, December 13 2006, 12:12 pm

I can't say it better.

Beautiful.
Cassandra (74.71.2.157) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 02:45 pm

Comment:

Love this one too. The last line makes me really miss everyone at Coby. There are spelling errors though, 'For' and 'mine'. But still another masterpeice. Seriously, if you want to write a book I would love to illustrate for you if you would like. I haven't even made that offer to my b/f lol!
Miz Trebor (137.36.208.85) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 05:48 pm

No totally mispelled

Ok "fro" is supposed to be "for", but myne is correct. I like to use unconventional spellings every now and then.
 
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