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Remember Me
5 September, 2003
Author: Del

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Remember me? I'm the one
Who taught you how to love,
That one warm night so long ago
Under that moon mellow sky up above.

There was a magnetic force in the air,
It kept drawing us so close together.
Then your soft tender lips were touching mine
With a kiss as light as a feather.

The spark of that kiss ignited my heart,
With a fire that burned so brightly.
I guess you were a bit surprised
When I held you oh, so tightly.

I could tell this thrill you were feeling,
Was a very new feeling for you.
You didn't push me away, my dear,
But you didn't know what to do.

So, I decided to teach you,
Everything I knew about love.
It was so easy, you learned so quickly
Under that moon mellow sky up above.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Silkened Moon (aka Enchantress) (206.214.66.247) -- Friday, October 10 2003, 03:46 am

Awesome and Sweet!

How much more beautiful could you get with a love poem as this. Del, so far, it's one of the most exquisite love poems I've ever read. The passion, the fire....it's so magical and full of fantasy! Not saying it couldn't be true of course! Keep writing, I'll keep reading!
Terrie* (65.150.167.108) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 05:44 am

brings back fond memories.....

dang... i really love this, awakening of the senses... if my better half was still alive i'd share this with him...beautifully written......takes me back to memories of my first love..
thank you for bringing back those sensual memories..
 
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