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Hey Girl,
5 January, 2007
Author: Miztrebor

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Hey Girl,
Where have you been
What have you been up to
Can you let me in

Hey Girl,
What have you done
You’re not what i remember
What have you become

Hey Girl,
I need you now
The way you used to be
Before you left town

Hey Girl,
You left me on my knees
Begging like a fool
Underneath the trees

Hey Girl,
The one i used to know
I don’t want you, not this was
Just get up and go

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Cassandra (74.71.2.157) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 02:18 pm

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Aww its sad but I like it! In the line 'I don't want you, not this was' I assume was is suppose to be way. I want to know who the first kiss and this one are about...
 
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