Addicted To You
6 January, 2007
Author: Miztrebor
Every time that our eyes meet
I can’t stand
My knees go weak
Why can’t i break this spell
Impossible now
‘Cause i just feel
Head fell back and hit the door
Glass broken
All over the floor
Lying, bleeding, but so happy
Look up to heaven
It’s you i see
Come up for air, to meet your lips
It’s how i felt
With our first kiss
Drifting off into the air
Looking down to you
And your flowing hair
With this you get me high
No need for drugs
To get me by
You’re the only thing in this world
That rearranges me
You’re my girl
I’m gonna need another hit
Don’t stop now
I don’t want to quit
I feel you though my veins today
You’re so beautiful
And when you quit
I feel alone, so cold
I need a fix
I need you lips
I see your face
Those dirty hips
Dancing, dancing
Around my body
Intrancely still
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Cassandra (74.71.2.157) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 02:10 pm I really like this one...alot but the one thing that buggs me is 'those dirty hips'. It sounds so wrong and ruins the line. I would put 'I see your face' first in that line because having two 'I needs' right after the other sounds funny. But yet another great poem! I really want a book :( |
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