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Blue Moon
17 January, 2007
Author: Miztrebor

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Tears stream down my face tonight,
As i look out at the midnight sky.
I can’t see the one i Love the most,
The one with the stars in her eyes.

Blue moon,
Blue moon,
Please won’t you come home soon.

The sky is black without her face.
It looks empty and so strange.
I am lost inside this confusion
Can’t i wait for her phase to change?

Blue moon,
Blue moon,
Won’t you come back soon,
My blue moon.

I’ll be here looking up,
Fighting in the tears i don’t wanna cry.
Think of the days back when
I held her by my side.

Blue moon,
Blue moon,
It’ll be a good day soon.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (67.58.204.78) -- Thursday, January 18 2007, 06:31 pm

liked it

It read so smoothly.Nice to read.thank-you
Bipedalguy (4.156.144.11) -- Thursday, January 18 2007, 11:50 pm

Great Poem/Song

With the right melody, that would make a good song. Good job.
barb (67.58.204.78) -- Friday, January 19 2007, 02:50 am

a great song

I agree with Bip.
Meridian (71.253.222.228) -- Friday, January 19 2007, 04:14 am

and Im-a jump on the band wagon

and say what everybody else has said... good job and nice description. Miztrebor, are you in any Creative Writing classes? You break it down like a English professor with this poem...

Beautiful M!
Helena (147.205.230.58) -- Saturday, January 20 2007, 11:22 pm

: )

can i say anything not already said? lol. i really enjoyed it and can't wait to hear it!
Cassandra (74.71.2.157) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 01:53 pm

Comment:

Nice, I really will have to make you play all these songs for me next time I see you ;)
 
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