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What The Night Wind Brings
23 January, 2007
Author: Bipedalguy

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In the dark, who can say why the night wind sings?
Could the sound of the wind hide evil things?
Something wicked, fearing light,
or a tiger in the night,
or is it only a song the wind with it brings?

------- Author's Notes -------

I hope it's the last one. I don't care for the other two, especially at night.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (66.81.130.140) -- Tuesday, January 23 2007, 06:49 pm

truly delightful

Ahhh the whispers of the wind.. reminds me of spirits both good and bad, and music in windchimes.. Bip,you bring your poetry to life, this was Fantastic!
Bipedalguy (4.156.51.29) -- Wednesday, January 24 2007, 03:42 pm

Thanks Terrie*

Thanks for the nice comments. I'm glad you liked it.
Tammy (64.57.162.181) -- Wednesday, January 24 2007, 06:32 pm

Bip

I really enjoyed this, Great Write:)
barb (67.58.200.82) -- Thursday, January 25 2007, 04:21 am

nice

Enjoyable read. I like the positivity you bring to your writing. Thanks
Bipedalguy (4.156.129.25) -- Thursday, January 25 2007, 04:32 am

Thanks Tammy,

Thanks for your kind comment.
This was another suddenly written Limerick. It seems that the ones I really work on are the ones that never get completed. Now I am thinking of a revision for this one, because I think I can make it read better.
Bipedalguy (4.156.144.4) -- Thursday, January 25 2007, 02:59 pm

Tusen tak, Barb

That's Norwegian for "Thousand thanks, Barb"
I had to come up with a variation on my comment title. I knew how to say it, but to spell it, I had to look it up. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks again
Renee (66.153.67.186) -- Wednesday, October 22 2008, 05:56 pm

What the night wind brings

What a lovely one--starting with fear and ending with hope.
Puppet (147.144.66.208) -- Wednesday, October 22 2008, 06:32 pm

.beautiful

I like this a lot, its got great imagery.
Bipedalguy (65.96.237.196) -- Monday, October 27 2008, 03:59 pm

Thanks, Renee and Puppet

I appreciate these kind comments.
It gives me the courage to try another one.
Bipe
 
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