Leave Others Be
31 January, 2007
Author: Shan
Look at yourself
What do you see?
I promise it's not the same
As when you're staring at me
Do you mock in the mirror
Pretending to be someone else?
Do you take your OWN advise
Before handing it out?
Do you judge by the look
Or see deep in soul and heart
Do you read me like a book?
Can you rip me apart???
What's your intentions
When you bring others down
What runs through your mind
As you're watching them frown
Stern, stands my face
Gleam, remains in my eyes
Stare once more
And you may see steam from my ears
LEAVE OTHER PEOPLE ALONE
OR YOU'LL GET YOURS, SOON
YOU HEAR!!?!?!?!?!
------- Author's Notes -------
i'm actually a little TO rippin mad to be writing on my feelings here.. i didn't say all the emotion i WANTED to put in this.. i guess i just take other peoples hearts to gently sometimes... |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| barb (67.58.199.3) -- Thursday, February 1 2007, 03:14 pm This is so good and how alot of us feel. I don't know why some have to be so critical over things they don't understand.thanks for the read. |
| shan (65.29.54.133) -- Thursday, February 1 2007, 03:43 pm thanks barb!! you de bestest! meh, people can be down right cruel, and frankly, it makes ME wanna say and do something that'll make a difference to them.. make them stop for a second and THINK. the sad thing is tho.. i think a lot of people like that, just get to wrapped up in themselves to realize that it's not a sign of weakness to respect anothers style, weather it be writing, or clothing or well, anything. thanks for reading :-D you're great!!! |
| barb (67.58.199.3) -- Thursday, February 1 2007, 09:18 pm thanks shan I don't know how some can only think of themselves and be happy with themselves. |
| Nicole Ricketts (68.111.150.31) -- Sunday, February 11 2007, 10:04 pm i like this one, sometimes I want to strangle some people that piss me off. They are so ignorant, but I stay strong and smarter. Writing your thoughts down, can sometimes release them so they don't get locked up inside and blow. |
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