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Space
2 February, 2007
Author: Scorpio

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You amaze me
And to this day
I still don’t know why
I find so many things
To compensate for
What you think is right
But I still come back to
How it should be
Inside your eyes
I find every little star
Each galaxy just orbiting
Around your aura
Like a phantasmal dream
As I fly away
Into space with you
Always

------- Author's Notes -------

Inspired by Blue October's "Into The Ocean"

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (67.58.199.3) -- Friday, February 2 2007, 05:46 am

kept my attention

It flowed so easily, a good write and for it to keep my attention ,it must of been good.lol
 
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