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With You
8 February, 2007
Author: Shan

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I know everything I say,
Means as much to you
As it does to me
There's never a doubt of the truth
With these two hearts in use
I know I can speak my mind
With no thought to how it sounds
No matter how it comes out
I feel, that in my heart
Are thoughts of mine are yours, intertwined
With you, there's memories I'll never forget
Time with you is something I'll never regret
Rough times we've been through
Laughter, or silence,
It doesn't matter how it was spent
We're so close, we connect
On a level most people have never met
There's not many people who see through
Not many who have what we've set
A weave of a tight vine
Half yours and half mine
We've watched each other grow
We make paths of our own
And bring out laughs in each other
We finish thoughts and sentences
Before they are spoken
Together, we are never broken
You're my second half, you're my other
Your my "all I have" before and after
And when everything has gone under
I'm your sun rays to follow the thunder
You're the reason my dreams stay alive
When we start to sway and ponder
We talk about our lives and wonders
You've been everything to me
I've been you're crutch
You've been my glue
Everyday with you means so much
I know I don't even need to say this to you
You know it already, that I need
To speak what is true
So my heart will speak
My pen will seep through
Here's to you my friend, my lover
May life be lived forever
*~*WITH YOU*~*

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (67.58.202.235) -- Friday, February 9 2007, 01:47 am

perfect love

This is a real love.don't ever lose it. a good write about what real love means. thanks
shan (65.29.54.133) -- Friday, February 9 2007, 02:11 am

:-D

barb it's what i pray to find in a person. lol i havn't had a boyfriend, no, never MIND a boyfriend.. i havn't had a DATE since i was 18.. well no, i did have one.. lol who turned out to be a lying, cheatin, no good son of a ..... and oh well, maybe i'll write a poem about him.. lol thanks for reading!!
barb (67.58.202.235) -- Friday, February 9 2007, 05:29 am

remember

To find what you want. You have to keep looking start out as friends just hang out together. Find out if you like doing the same things or not. And don't say its a date,that adds pressure. just meet for a coffee and always meet in a public place and have your own transportation home until you feel comfortable. I know I sound like a mother. Well these are things I told my girls. yes write about your date. let others know what is a bad date lol
shan (65.29.54.133) -- Friday, February 9 2007, 07:54 am

haha! thank you!!!!

you're absolutely right.. and that's exactly the reason i HAVN'T had what i wrote about here, is because i DO search for that special thing.. that comfortable feeling. i've met lots of different people... but none so far have been "it". weather or not it'll ever happen for me, doesn't worry or bother me at all.. it's the ride along the way to where ever i end up that i enjoy most in life. and THANK YOU, for sounding "motherish" lol what you said means a lot to me :-) have a good night!!
 
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