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You Failed
11 February, 2007
Author: Leah06

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It all goes wrong
On your knees you fall
They look at you with disgrace
Your about to loose it all.
Can't breathe can't sleep
No one seems to care
You scream you cry
Your pulling at your hair.
They tell you it's too late
You can't undo your wrong
Your dream now unreachable
You waited far too long.
How does it feel to fail
Proving they were right
Your a loser in this world
You lost the ultimate fight.

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Terrie* (66.81.130.1) -- Monday, February 12 2007, 06:10 am

Never a Failure...

A good friend of mine shares alot of wisdom shared by his step-dad one of them is " It doesn't matter how many times you fall... What matters is how many times you pick yourself up that counts..this was an excellent write.. THERE ARE NEVER ANY LOSERS...
Leah06 (137.150.199.165) -- Monday, February 12 2007, 06:53 am

Terrie*

Thank you do much for reading. this one was difficult because i was truly so frustrated i could hardly think straight. Thanks for the advice as well. Best Wishes.
 
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