Immortal's Lament by Miztrebor

Sweet serenade, of a siren’s song
Rings through my veins
Seems to me that all i fear
Has just gone away

Sweet like her voice
I listen to the rain
Tapping on the roof
Soothing me to dream

Sing to me, when i hit the rocks
Wash upon the shore
Left alone, for a million years
Waiting evermore

This immortal soul
Won’t die today
Lying broken up
With the tide
I drift away

Down the river, i’ll float on
Humming our song
To the valley of death, i will find my way
I will brave the storm

Terrie* (66.81.129.184) -- Wednesday, February 14 2007, 02:43 am

Different and Delicate Paintin'
Miztrebor, you created such a desirin' effect with your choice of words, that affects many hearts...has a soothin' ripple to any pond of water..this was awesome..you have a great God given Gift..keep that pen and heart attached...

Cassandra (74.71.2.157) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 01:45 pm

Comment:
This is deffinatly one of my favorites if not thee favorite, without even reading all the others. It flows really well.

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