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Trees
17 March, 2007
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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Some trees like humans are strong.

Some are weepy.
Some are fragile.
Some are young.
Some are old.
Some are beautiful.
Some are withered.

Like us they all need and want nurturing
and love to grow.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Bipedalguy (4.156.51.84) -- Saturday, March 17 2007, 01:25 pm

So true

This poem, as it's shown here, resembles a tree with the top line spreading out like the limbs. The middle six lines, each of which has 3 words, form the trunk.
The last sentance forms a spreading root system, the most important part of all.
barb (66.46.142.242) -- Saturday, March 17 2007, 02:30 pm

thanks for reading bip

I was out on my round about scooter and looked at different trees and they inspired a write.
Robert (69.228.13.107) -- Saturday, March 17 2007, 03:10 pm

Trees

I like the way you have compared trees and nature to people and their needs...
Very nice poem Barb.
barb (67.58.199.61) -- Saturday, March 17 2007, 06:51 pm

Thanks Robert

One of my faults is that I compare things. Good with bad,love with hate,beauty with ugliness,etc.I'm glad you read me too.
Capricorn (82.46.181.105) -- Saturday, March 17 2007, 08:40 pm

truly beautiful

This is such a beautiful poem Barb and I love the way you draw comparisons between the trees and us. Excellent write.
BARB (67.58.199.61) -- Saturday, March 17 2007, 08:58 pm

thanks alot cap

I know I write very simply, that way I can understand it.lol
 
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