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Gazing Into The Night Sky
20 March, 2007
Author: Miztrebor

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Chase away my dreams tonight,
Scare away all my nightmares.
You are what keeps me up, at night,
Drowning in my own tears.

I am taken away, as I lay here,
Sleeping without my eyes closed.
There is another place,
There is a better world.
There it is just above my finger,

As I point to behind the moon.
Your face conceals my haven,
All until you reveal those eyes.
I get lost in your windows,
Always with the hope of getting in.

Al I can do is gaze up tonight
The stars are bright,
But they can not replace you,
With your shinning face in the sky.

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Princess Moon (204.56.135.2) -- Wednesday, April 4 2007, 09:14 pm

Nice one...

Nice one Miztrebor, its so creative and mystical. I love it! I especially like the part"As I point to behind the moon/Your face conceals my haven,/All until you reveal those eyes./I get lost in your windows,/Always with the hope of getting in.."-love those lines! Keep writing, I'll keep reading!
 
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