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Unnoticed
18 April, 2007
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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Death from accidents or old age brings tears.
Death from someones unexpected rage brings fears.

To protect little kids from hurting themselves amd others,
We make it hard or impossible for them to get ahold of harmful items.
Something that might of been prevented,with a little more protection and stricter rules.
Sad that these family and friends are going through this.
Problems as a kid seem small.
Problems that were small.
Grow with the child to be tall.
This is to let the family and friends of Virginia Tech people to care and realize there has to be a change.

------- Author's Notes -------

This isn't a sermon,and don't mean to upset anyone or insult. It's a sad thing to happen.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

j janson (22.19.222.3) -- Wednesday, April 18 2007, 03:33 am

rule and protection???? HA

what rules? rules like dont bring your guns to school. you cant stop a psycho they have nothing to lose all the rules and protection will not keep you safe. safety is an illusion
Barb (67.58.206.163) -- Wednesday, April 18 2007, 04:03 am

I guess I should explain

I didn't mean the rule of not bringing a gun to school, I meant don't make so easy to get harmful things. We put scissors ,knifes away so our little babys don't have easy access to harmful tools.Why can't we make it harder for psyco's (as you put it)to get harmful tools.
barb (67.58.198.76) -- Wednesday, April 18 2007, 04:35 pm

correction

The last line is suppose to say people do care not to. It made it sound like virginia people should care,but I meant other people do care typo of to and do changes my meaning, sorry.
 
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