Determination by Barbara Goodhew

My body and my life became a mess.
So I have spent years looking for a yes.

Told that your Talent of writing is good.
You know it's good, it puts you in a good mood.

All the experts say yes they are unique honey,
We will publish and sell them, just give us the money.

If you know what you do is nice,
Take this advice.

Have them pay you for your talent.

I won't give-up looking for a yes.
Only this time I won't be fooled, I confess

Capricorn (82.45.57.95) -- Thursday, May 24 2007, 11:35 am

Bravo!
Oh yes -- get them to pay you Barb. Too many publishers are only after your money. I love this one! Great rhymes btw.

barb (67.58.213.235) -- Thursday, May 24 2007, 11:53 am

thanks cap
Yea It took me awhile but I learned.

Clive B Ringshall (168.103.113.227) -- Sunday, May 27 2007, 12:12 am

Barbs Eye
Hello Barb,
A big YES to you and how true your words reflect those who's goal is money, money,money.
Love your truth

barb (67.58.199.254) -- Sunday, May 27 2007, 08:09 am

thanks Clive
Yes why does helping have a price tag, grr

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