Critisim
10 June, 2007
Author: Barbara Goodhew
Rude rhymes ,with what some people are :crude:
Hope rhymes ,with what some people are :dope:
Y is for "Y" be so bitter.
Mate rhymes, with a word that causes strife :hate:
Egotistical, rhymes with a word for the uninformed.
:PITIFUL:
------- Author's Notes -------
This is a write using rhyming words. yes lots of rhymes,but no sense to it.Writing from life experiences no rhymes but lots feelings which we all understand. |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Capricorn (82.45.57.95) -- Tuesday, June 12 2007, 11:27 pm ... I think I know why you wrote this! |
| barb (67.58.205.213) -- Wednesday, June 13 2007, 12:17 am I am easy to figure out aren't I cap lol |
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