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How God Made Dads
14 June, 2007
Author: Dman14

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god took the strength of a mountain,
the majesty of a tree,
the warmth of a summer sun,
the calm quiet sea,
the generous soul of nature,
the comforting arm of night,
the wisdom of the ages,
the power of the eagles flight,
the joy of a morning in spring,
the strength of a mustard seed,
the patience of an eternity,
then god combined these qualities,
when there was nothing more to add,
he knew his masterpiece was complete,
and so he called it dad

------- Author's Notes -------

HAPPY FATHERS DAY to all the dads

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (64.57.162.25) -- Thursday, June 14 2007, 05:20 pm

Beautiful

I truly loved this write, beauitful!
Barb (67.58.210.77) -- Thursday, June 14 2007, 09:31 pm

So touching

This is a great write, I hope you show your Dad,what a beautiful father's day gift.
#5-0 Geezer (71.217.32.253) -- Saturday, June 16 2007, 09:52 pm

Excellent!

A father is very appreciative of a poem like this, and from a son who wrote it. I really enjoyed your poem and want to say, thank you. Even a grandfather loves this too. Keep writing Dman14. You are doing awesome.
 
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