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The Dream We Shared Last Night
18 July, 2003
Author: Del

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I still can see you smile at me
While the firelight was gleaming.
'I love you so,' you whispered low.
I knew I must be dreaming.

A bearskin rug, a fireplace
Two arms that held me tight.
Oh, darling, it was heavenly
The dream we shared last night

You whispered that you loved me
And then you dimmed the light.
You kissed me oh, so tenderly
In the dream we shared last night.

The way my heart was singing
Made everything seem right,
Our love became complete, my dear
In the dream we shared last night.

It was just a dream, my darling,
But it filled me with delight.
Forever I'll remember
The dream we shared last night

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Enchantress (204.32.64.66) -- Tuesday, July 22 2003, 05:36 am

Oncore! Oncore! (srry if mispelled)

If this were part of a novel or something, it would be the right touch to the emotion. Even not being a part of a book, it feels so real to me. Oncore! Oncore! I loved it! times 1000000000! ONCORE! ONCORE!
KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 07:20 am

Beautiful...just....

BEAUTIFUL...I loved this poem along with many of your others..You are an awesome writer and I look forward to your poems as they get better and better each time I read one...
Ben (67.123.245.208) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 08:08 am

Burst into flames......

Del, as I was reading this my hair burst into flames and caught my hat on fire! If this were a song I think it would melt everybodys speakers when they played it on the radio. You are a talented writer! Now, excuse me please. I gotta go get the vaccum and clean up these ashes! Ha! Ha! Haaa! ***Ben
 
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