Returned by RinRin

The tallness of the lightpost
pales against the superior
wooden stalk of wise old man
betwixt it and the wise old men
following.
I stare amidst winds and
occasional low rumblings
in the distance...

There are few raindrops now.
The sky has cried again;
what an emotional sky!
It is a mirror, yet I see not
my own reflection inside it.

Raindrops persist a little more,
and the sky cannot control
its sadness.
I wonder if the Earth feels
it is drowning?
I am reminded of springtime,
when rainshowers are exceedingly
common.

Flowers.

Bambi.

What wanderings this nature
makes my mind do!
I wish for darker clouds
and deeper rumblings.
Will they shake the house again?

So it's been a while...
To those of you who remember me, hello again! I think I'm going to start posting again..I really missed this place :).

Meridian (64.12.117.11) -- Wednesday, July 11 2007, 05:45 am

I love the way
You describe the scenery in your poem. You write so ingeniously and I don't even know what that means. By the way, where's Toosdee? Is he still going to submit poems up here with you?

But all in all, you knock em' dead with your poems. You go girlio!

Pondering Red (65.94.17.115) -- Thursday, July 12 2007, 11:06 pm

though provoking
what an awesome poem..i like poetry with nature in it....good descriptions, questions....as i said - thought provoking...well done !!!

RinRin (69.133.136.143) -- Friday, July 13 2007, 12:42 am

:)
Thank you both! Ah, my husband WAS going to submit some poetry, but I think he chickened out..hehe! Thanks again for your comments, greatly appreciated! :)

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