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Boiling Point
8 October, 2007
Author: Miztrebor

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The lights dimming,
The lights go out.
The sound trembles my body,
Within and without.
The feelings of the explosion
Still aching in my chest.
A gaping hole,
And a reason
To why the pressure subdued.
The passion couldn’t vent off,
Built up, quicker everyday.
She left me waiting
With her scent in my bed,
Then it slowly faded away.
I found another in her place,
But it never worked this way.
Now that i’ve found out,
She could only handle,
The passion inside of me.
While all the others
Forced me to subside.
This is the reason,
That on this day,
I died!
This torment inside my mind,
I couldn’t hide.
I set out to find an outlet
For all my pain.
But no one could ever handle,
All the s*** that she could put up with, from me.

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