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Drugs The Annihilator
17 October, 2007
Author: Michael Bradley Nelson

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Drugs, so many things to be said about it.
Makes us feel good when we do it.
Makes us feel much more artistic.
Makes us feel on top of the world with it.
But there is a price.
For this easy way of rise.
Soon you crash inside.
As confusion hits your mind.
You become trapped and you scream.
To hear it echo like in a dream.
And above you is a key.
But so high it is out of reach.
So you run looking for the next high.
To try and fly to reach that key in the sky.
The fuel runs out when you near every time.
As you come crashing down inside you cry.
Help someone help me please.
But even their ears are out of reach.
Or at least that's what it seams.
For you are still in a dream.
A dream that can never be woke from.
Unless you quit and say I'm done.
you can still dream, explore yourself on.
The high of life, the best hight to be on.
Those unwilling change it'll be their maker.
It'll take their life, drugs the annihilator.

------- Author's Notes -------

Any addicts better think about this.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

anonymous (71.217.17.112) -- Friday, October 19 2007, 07:59 am

A wow poem!

I see my stepson in your poem, alcohol the addiction. At 40, lots of dreams, none reached. He's on top of the list, as the worst. Curled in a ball with shakes. Will not listen to anyone, only his mom, flys in, reaches her son, in her eyes, sees a good man full of laughter, guides him to rehab. More drugs to fight the addiction. A disease? Will he quit and say he's done? The pain he puts his mom through. The annihilator and the maker is standing by his bedside tonight. Thanks for a great poem Micheal.
andres carrillo (69.127.24.254) -- Wednesday, September 17 2008, 06:07 pm

drugs the annihilator

could i use your poems
Alisha (68.205.180.166) -- Friday, October 17 2008, 12:15 am

thanks

THANK YOU FOR SHARING THE TRUTH
Puppet (71.202.113.80) -- Friday, October 17 2008, 03:28 am

nice

I like it, a good energy to it. keep it up!
stacey (81.151.146.83) -- Wednesday, March 4 2009, 09:23 pm

amazing

hey can i ues this for my drama cours work it is amazing
spssab (10.128.73.7) -- Saturday, March 31 2012, 03:52 am

please!

can i use your poem , cause my teacher gave me homework base on drug poem ,, please can i use your poem ??
 
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