Rainy Daydreams by Miztrebor

I can’t concentrate today
As wet hours go by.
The words blur through my head,
Though i smile all this time.
This window to my left,
I see a beauty there,
My Love is raining down for me.
She is smiling,
She is bare,
Nakedly raining,
Pure and innocent in thought.
My Love,
For who all my life
I have sought.
She beholds my heart
And i take hers into me.
We’ll dance together on this day:
Her hair flowing,
Her form moving to our song.

Bipedalguy (75.67.182.104) -- Friday, November 16 2007, 07:20 pm

Very Nice
Your use of words is very good. My guess is that you see a pattern on the rain spattered window which with imagination becomes the image of a beautiful woman. Something like cloud formations which, because of the infinite amount of random visual detail they provide, one can get whatever image is desired. Daydreams are great. I try to do as much of it as possible.
Great write. Bipe

GMP (74.70.2.89) -- Monday, November 19 2007, 01:59 am

Beautiful
It is the most beautiful poem I have ever read and it definetly shows your love between you and you know who...hehe

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