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So Glad
16 May, 2003
Author: Dino Hi

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I see the writings everywhere
Why? What's going on?
All over the picture frames, bulletin board
What does it all mean?
I'm insensitive, I don't pay attention
Not flirted with, don't show love
She's gone, catching the first plane out
I don't know what I did wrong?
I'm confused, left alone now
Seeing everywhere, these writings in red
Then I awake, door is close
I yell her name, no answer
I get dress quickly, I see her leaving
Going out the door, she's moving quickly
Hi Hon! I gotta go, mail all these letters
Go to the hospital, oh wait, my other shoes
I love you! I love you too!
How do I look? She speeds away
I find a card she left behind, it says
"I want you by my side, even when we're growed up, and growed old"
It was only a bad dream I had
So glad, So glad, So glad

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Tuesday, May 20 2003, 11:22 am

Fears

They say dreams can show our innermost fears! Is this what you fear? Good writing!
Bench (192.168.0.120,) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 08:36 am

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I can feel the fear in this poem. I get this sometimes too! Nice piece here!
CrYsTaL (216.63.217.252) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 05:52 pm

Nice one, Dino!

Really got me thinking on the moment, couldn't have made it better!
Dino (67.26.86.214) -- Thursday, May 22 2003, 07:17 am

Thanks all!

Thanks Cap, Bench, and CrYsTaL. For commenting on my poem. For a poem I through off to the side for months, I'm really surprized it got a comment. Goes to show you, you just never know. Yes, I guess it was a fear and the dream seem so real. Thanks again!
 
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