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Blue Sea, Blue Sea
7 December, 2007
Author: Princess Moon

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Blue sea, blue sea...where does the moon want to dance tonight
Will his crescent smile fall upon the Hawaiin shore
Will his twinkling starry eyes push past the Eiffel Tower
Or will he even join Miss Liberty for a midnight stroll

Blue sea, blue sea...I think he's chosen you this night
To draw you close to his radiance
With the gravitational dance he pulls out of you
He wants to hear your silvery whispers in the salty air
He want to look upon your wave curls, like a woman's silhouette
He wants to woo you with romantic moonlight and morsels of stardust

Blue sea, blue sea...tonight is your night
Show him your heart holds secrets of shipwrecks and lost souls so deep
Challenge his sympathy with the tears you have given up to the heavens
Then sprinkled with heart ache upon all the world to see

Blue sea, blue sea...he's meant for you
Draw close to him to be cradled in his arms
Let him cause you to move your curves in revelation that you ARE a lady
A lady in dire need of "natural" touch...and love

------- Author's Notes -------

I was inspired to change it up a bit and make the moon the guy in this "natural" love he has with the sea. Hope you like it! Tell me what you think.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (67.187.237.233) -- Friday, December 7 2007, 11:52 pm

Footprint of Natural Love--

Hi Princess Moon--i LOVED this--
very LOVELY indeed --i Loved the way your inspiration captured my attention--by the beauty of your chosen words --a vivid "Enchantin' Escape" I'm deeply mesmerized--please don't wake me up ~smile~
unless it is to-- acknowledge that unforgettable NATURAL touch--
you write and draw us into a memorable inspirin' Trance--Keep pennin' your lovely work--
Princess Moon (168.53.174.185) -- Saturday, December 8 2007, 09:52 pm

Thanks Terrie

I'm so glad you loved it. I really appreciate the comment. I love to write, and this one is one of the first ones I've written on nature in a long time. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I loved it too once I read through it after finishing it. Thanks again.
Meridian (64.12.116.201) -- Monday, December 10 2007, 08:26 pm

deep

Princess! This poem was so deep, I'm lost...lost in the words. Astounding girl! You know, I feel dumbfounded now that your poem just made me speechless...inarticulate...

Girl, I not only give you a 10 but a 100! Great stuff!
Princess Moon (24.170.41.14) -- Tuesday, December 11 2007, 11:18 pm

Well thank you very much!

Well thanks a lot Meridian. That means a lot coming from a fellow poet! You know I really like some of your poems as well, you have that unique way of writing that I just love. It's so nice to hear that you liked this poem in particular. I really like it myself when I read it, I just wanted to share it with yall. Thanks for the comment again! Glad I got your 100 pts. LOL
Hope (203.59.180.184) -- Friday, April 18 2008, 07:49 am

Beautiful Images

Beautiful and touching visions , I live near the ocean and love watching the moon shine upon the sea
 
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