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Our Hearts Are Interlaced
2 January, 2008
Author: Hope

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In weaving threads to and fro
Loving hearts interlaced
Everything we have shared
Could never be replaced

In strengthening ties that bind
Yours threaded with mine
In colourful dreams created
Our loving hearts entwine

Heartprints we have blended
Creating a loving tapestry
Each gave reasons to shine
Love shared continuously

Closely bonded forevermore
Across threads interlaced
Within hearts we had woven
Love we each embraced

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Princess Moon (24.170.41.14) -- Friday, January 4 2008, 05:24 am

Beautiful..

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I loved how much you compared in lacing the heart rather than just describing them together. I find this poem so beautifully "interlaced" from verse to verse. Especially the line "Heartprints we have blended/ Creating a loving tapestry..." I loved that line. It kind of created a colorful painting for me. Lovely, just lovely!
Lamar Cole (76.194.108.239) -- Saturday, March 8 2008, 07:53 pm

Love Will Bind

Just as a stapler will bind paper, love will bind people.
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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