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Lets Take A Trip
14 March, 2008
Author: Cody Christopher

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Have you ever took a trip
thru the mind,
Feel a little blind
Everything is so kind
The air is unusually fresh
The grass beneath my toes
is smooth as silk
The woods is safe
and the world is my friend
Objects appear to me
that no one else can see
My throat tingles
as my body flows with pleasure
Nothing makes sense
But seems so right
Love my neighbor
and kiss your baby
Lets smell this flower
then take a shower
If every one would take the time
and expand there mind
The world might find
the peace vine
and swing hand in hand
through this beautiful land

------- Author's Notes -------

I wrote this poem cause im a 22 year old hippy and I love to experiment with mind expanding items. This is how I feel when im taking a trip on Shrooms, Acid Peyote etc. I love life and feel this way all the time not just while tripping. Peace

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Billy Reeves (67.33.247.158) -- Tuesday, March 18 2008, 11:31 am

I like

This poem is great, I know exactly how you feel man. Peace
Dan (72.10.122.233) -- Monday, March 24 2008, 11:53 am

Kudos man

Blazin' poem, I can definately relate
Puppet (71.202.113.80) -- Wednesday, September 24 2008, 07:23 am

...

Dude, I once did peyote with a friend, then ran all around golden gate park. This poem remis me of how I felt, the awe of nature, the sweet smell of grass and flowers and ferns. Keep writing.
Bipedalguy (65.96.237.196) -- Wednesday, September 24 2008, 02:30 pm

Right on, Far out, and groovy

Let's get plugged in, turned on,tuned in, and tripped out. Like I know where you're coming from man.
barb (67.58.197.169) -- Sunday, September 28 2008, 03:51 am

good write

To bad that you have to take something to really enjoy life. Your writing is good but the subject sounds like you are condoning artificial ways to get through life. Not My Idea of living
 
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