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Changing
7 May, 2008
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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From birth to age 12 we are like a puddle.
Unassuming wanting someday to grow up and be a pond.

From 12 to 30 we are like a river.
Always running,with some heavy rapids to go through

From 30 and up we are like a pond.

peaceful ,calm and still.

WE MADE IT.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrye* (67.187.237.233) -- Wednesday, May 7 2008, 07:13 pm

Gr8 Comparrison--

Barb,
Magnificent!!Such a quality creation--
I must say-I truly admire how you're growin' in your Poetry--
I love the reflection of the content Sunset as it drapes over the serenity of the waters--

many beautiful things are captured within you-
i enjoyed this-
it is Beautiful!!absolutely Beautiful!!!
barb (67.58.197.169) -- Wednesday, May 7 2008, 11:43 pm

thanks alotTerry

I don't have a problem writing my feelings.but voicing them is hard for me.Why who knows. lol
 
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