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Beautiful Moment
10 June, 2008
Author: LinzAy

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Would you believe I saw that smile again?
I saw that wonderful look in his eyes
I felt...happy...inside again
Content
For a moment that I wish could have lasted longer
But I'm satisfied
I've yearned to see his eyes shine
I've yearned to hear his voice in it's soothing manner
I've yearned to inhale his comforting scent
I've yearned to feel the world disappear in his embrace
I've yearned to see him smile...again
And I did
I saw his eyes shine while he spoke
I was able to breathe him in as he held me
I saw his smile
It may have only been for a moment
But it was a beautiful moment
For a beautiful moment all my wishing hadn't seemed meaningless
For a beautiful moment...I was complete again

------- Author's Notes -------

just as it sounds :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrye* (67.187.237.233) -- Wednesday, June 11 2008, 06:46 am

Beautiful!!

Awww straight to the Heart w/o puncturin' the skin..what a lovely Moment to savor...yup sound Beautiful!!
barb (67.58.197.169) -- Wednesday, June 11 2008, 03:16 pm

good write

LinZay this write made me feel the beautiful moment. I want a beautiful moment lol.
LinzAy (72.189.15.210) -- Thursday, June 12 2008, 03:37 am

terrye and barb

Thanks a bunch guys :)
 
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