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My Favorite Tears
24 July, 2008
Author: Mental

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my favorite tears
were the ones highlighted
in your eyes.
open windows to the soul
were hazy and cold
streaming frozen trails
in ten fold.
pouting outward
eyelashes partially closed
tears pouring down
i just froze

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Bipedalguy (65.96.237.196) -- Tuesday, July 29 2008, 05:59 pm

Great imagery

The pictures that were created in my mind by so few words is surprising. These words are worth a thousand pictures.
rage (71.68.228.189) -- Friday, March 7 2014, 03:39 am

the tears of one

sounds very familiar. probably the last time you saw her, right?
tide (172.56.4.241) -- Thursday, July 30 2015, 10:16 pm

frozen trails

frozen feelings persist
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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