Rain
21 August, 2008
Author: LinzAy
Hair soaked and pieces falling in my face
Naked I stand ashamed
In this puddle
In this puddle of freezing pain
Shaking uncontrollably
Cold from the outside in
With nothing here to warm me
I hold onto myself searching desperately for warmth from within
But as with everyone else I let myself down
There's no fire inside that's survived
I collapse and fall to the ground
Straining to not give up some part of me must still be alive...
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| everett (32.176.33.216) -- Monday, March 16 2009, 06:17 am I love this poem! I dont know how i missed it lol. The last line was great... |
| LinzAy (71.43.163.82) -- Monday, March 16 2009, 02:56 pm Thanks :) I wrote this sitting on my friends porch and it was raining out...beautiful and sad with the dark sky and weeping trees. Glad you liked it :) |
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