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Pity The Worm
1 October, 2008
Author: Bipedalguy

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I bit into an apple today,
but the taste wasn’t great, I must say.
Then I saw half a worm,
and it started to squirm.
You’d squirm too, with your butt torn away.

------- Author's Notes -------

Sorry! That must be really sore.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (67.58.197.169) -- Thursday, October 9 2008, 02:34 am

yuk lol

good write and exactly the way it happened. Only I didn't think of the worms pain, only of my own disgust. but funny write thanks Bip.
Bipedalguy (65.96.237.196) -- Tuesday, October 21 2008, 06:43 am

Thanks, Barb

It took me a while to write a Limerick about a wormy apple, as you suggested, but I finally wrote one. Thanks for the comment.
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