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Afterglow
7 January, 2009
Author: Mental

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it was faint
but she's no saint
her clever eyes
do not reveal
what you should know
so cool and sleek
the shocking afterglow.
in my dreams the way you appeared
stealthy and glinting a gentle pout
my senses you commandeered
your smile didn't let me out.
unspoken lust
caught an eye
lonesome illusion
say good-bye.....forever.

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Tarna (75.16.229.82) -- Friday, January 9 2009, 05:23 pm

reality

Sometimes a dream dissipates with a touch of reality. But still the dream is nice... good writing..
 
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