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The Night Was Cut In Half
7 January, 2009
Author: Mental

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We may have touched
but there was something in between.
something not right
what does it mean?
the moon was full
but the night was cut in half
you left me like lull.
some things are better left silient
like secrets that are spoken
stares could be violent
feelings are broken.

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Tarna (75.16.229.82) -- Friday, January 9 2009, 05:13 pm

End of an evening

Sounds like an abrupt ending to evening that was going well... good writing... seems kind of a series with your other recent poems..
 
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