A Crumpled Notebook by Hope

So much was written
Upon those torn pages
Tears had been shed
Through various stages

In meant to be poems
Pages I have torn apart
On tear stained paper
I poured a broken heart

The feeling of despair
Not even words explain
Mixing tears and ink
Pages release the pain

A crumpled notebook
On pages I would write
More paper was torn
Shedding tears tonight

Colin (69.157.18.69) -- Tuesday, February 24 2009, 09:46 pm

if at first you don't succeed then try again
Life is like a work in progress. You just have to keep working on it and like your name - hope is something that we all need in order to keep moving forward in a postive refrain. By the way let me know what you think about my writing.
I am looking for a kindred spirit to correspond with!

Colin (65.92.44.2) -- Thursday, February 26 2009, 11:08 am

He who pontificates gets lost!
I was so busy pontificating about the content of your poem Hope I forgot to tell you how moved I am by your writing! Keep your thoughts alive!

Pamela (70.65.231.92) -- Wednesday, March 11 2009, 06:13 am

Fantastic!
This is a great poem, speaks to the deep nature of the poet when they are in those painful moments.....

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