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Let You Down
18 March, 2009
Author: LinzAy

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When you look into my eyes
Expect to fall apart in your mind
-'Cause there's poison in mine

And if you try to reacch my heart
It's just a shot in the dark
-'Cause I'm not fine...no, I'm not fine

Take steps away, steps away, steps away
I'll only let you down today, today
Just turn away, turn away, turn away
And you won't be let down today, today

If I could promise a true life
And not hold weakness in my mind
-We could carry this on

But I've fallen down before
Don't wanna make those mistakes anymore
-But I'm not that strong...not that strong

Take steps away, steps away, steps away
I'll only let you down today, today
Just turn away, turn away, turn away
And you won't be let down today, today

I hate to pass you up
But I'm afraid of messing up
No, I can't do that
You don't deserve that

------- Author's Notes -------

It's a song and is very melodic with many high notes....kind of a rock sound to it. Well, it's all in my head and a voice note on my blackberry :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (166.128.69.116) -- Friday, March 20 2009, 04:26 am

Linz...

Damn thats good! I'd love to hear the song, sounds like it would be great
LinzAy (71.43.163.82) -- Friday, March 20 2009, 03:07 pm

Song...

I actually approached my dad to see if his band could put music to it. I'll be speaking to them tonight about it, I think. If so, I'm gonna talk to my friend Brock-who produces, or Tim who's a student at FullSail and prob knows ppl who want to record. Holla! lol

Thanks for the compliment and read!
 
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