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A Woman Of Excess
8 May, 2009
Author: Karla Bardanza

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I am a woman of excess
Either i love or i hate
I confess...
I am woman who doesn’t know
How to kneel down...
(should i know this insecure art?)
My mother has never taught me
To be a good girl...(poor me!)
She said i should never bow...
Later she said i should never
Sink but always swim.
She has never fondled weakness
Inside of me, never.
When i am in despair, she says:
Look at yourself in the mirror and ask it
If you deserve this...
Most of the times the mirror says no.
So i fish courage somewhere.

I am a woman of excess...
I never allow my heart to close
The windows.

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Nina Simone (69.157.14.240) -- Friday, May 8 2009, 10:10 pm

your searing honesty moves me ....

your searing honesty moves me in this master class of how to write truthful unflinching poetry!
 
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