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Some Scars Betray My Memories
9 June, 2009
Author: Karla Bardanza

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Some scars betray my memories
And make me drink my own poison…
I quench my thirsty, I wipe my mouth
With my bleeding hand while it rains
Beautifully outside and inside of me.

My chains are so well disguised and I
Endure pain heroically…I even seem to be
Free…Nobody can see the stones I am
Carrying to throw at your window.

Nobody can see how prepared I am
To throw away this rage at your heart.
And there is no time to finish or start
My private war against my past…And
It is possibly the only one thing I can do
To forget that my soul still loves you.

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Colin (69.157.11.211) -- Wednesday, June 10 2009, 12:26 am

Strong, bold, passionate writing....

strong, bold, passionate writing - but then again that is your trademark - and a template that other aspiring writers/poets should look up to in order to maintain consistently high standards!
This is poetic excellence in any language!
 
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