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Broken.
12 October, 2009
Author: Taylor James

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Heart of stone,
lips of ice.
Snake in the grass,
filthy mice.

Burnt out soul,
no control.
Gone with the thunder,
watch you plunder.

Face of a clown,
no jokes in town.
Knife in the back,
body still intact.

Too weak to care,
breath of soiled air.
Words like a gun to the heart,
body and soul yet to depart.

Scent so stale,
the scent to fail.
Destiny intervened,
but no destiny in between.

Fight for love,
live for hate.
Try to help,
don't co-operate.

Hanging loose,
tie the noose,
around the neck,
hit the deck.

Empty shell,
soul in hell.
Revive the night,
still no end in sight.

painful laughter.

no happy ever after.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Mike (10.89.232.85) -- Monday, October 12 2009, 09:45 am

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Finally finished this then? :P Still think its the best one you've written x]!

PS Talking to me yet?????
Taylor James (82.132.136.149) -- Monday, October 12 2009, 01:23 pm

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thanks, i think its one of the best ive written too.

Ps i dunno text me to find out :P
Meridian (71.241.2.88) -- Monday, October 12 2009, 04:00 pm

TJ!

Glad to see you up here as well! Loved the flow! Hope you're back for good! Keep the poetry coming.
Colin (65.92.46.11) -- Monday, October 12 2009, 04:59 pm

Yes Taylor keep up the good work....

Yes Taylor keep up the good work.
Your words cut through with the precision of a poetic surgeon......
Taylor James (82.132.139.58) -- Monday, October 12 2009, 07:26 pm

;)

Thanks meri,dunno about back for good, but we'll see lol! an thanks colin,think thats the best phrase ive heard one of my poems compared to! thanks :D x
 
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