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The Embrace
20 November, 2009
Author: Karla Bardanza

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She embraces him tenderly with her watery arms,
weaving poems out of seagulls and sandcastles.
Diving silently into his soul, she finds black pearls
crystallized in promises, hidden in oceans of love,
carved from mossy rocks as the sea sleeps calmly
in her heart of delicate enchantment and beauty.

She embraces him and he sinks in her dark depths
of solitude and mystery tattooed in sacred shells.
She embraces him and he melts away in her hands,
sighing, whispering words that only love understands.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

The 7 Month Man (69.157.3.161) -- Friday, November 20 2009, 10:42 am

as fine as a piece of poetry....

...as fine as a piece of poetry that you have ever written!
PK Padhy (10.205.100.205) -- Thursday, November 26 2009, 08:43 am

Love sublime

I liked the poem much. The images are nicely created using metaphors.

Dr P K Padhy, India
LinzAy (68.205.210.142) -- Tuesday, December 8 2009, 01:37 am

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love it.
 
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