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Falling Star
21 January, 2010
Author: Bad Romance

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you're too far..too out of reach..
shimmering in the distance.
then like the sun, you shine gloriously.
almost blinding me by your sheer radiance..
by your sheer beauty.

you're like a shooting star.
you brightened my night..
bringing excitement to this almost boring existence...
then leaving my sky in darkness, leaving my life without a flicker.

you're just too far..too out of reach.
like the star i wished upon on tonight.

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Meridian (205.188.116.135) -- Saturday, January 23 2010, 05:15 pm

all I can say is...powerful

Oh, this is good. Bad Romance, I'm telling you, this is very powerful. I've already said that, but "Falling Star" is so good, I'm speechless.
Bad Romance (121.1.18.241) -- Sunday, January 24 2010, 03:09 pm

@Meridian

hey, thank you very much. i really appreciate that :)your comments really inspire me more.
 
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