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To Serve Their Generals
19 February, 2010
Author: Elizabeth Squires

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to serve their generals
the soldiers file in
clouds of trepidation
apportion their skin

the harsh front of battle
will test their resolve
mistakes and errors of battle
their generals wont absolve

unto the job of killing
the soldiers must ford
their generals holding
the dominant swords

the soldiers are at
their generals behest
and must muster nerve
out front of the quest

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Stephen Harper (69.157.2.237) -- Monday, April 4 2011, 02:19 pm

always has been

always has been one of my favorites by you - it's quite astonishing because you write this from a man's point of view - and not too many writers of the female gender could pull something like this off - the way you have!
And it's a poetic morality tale too by way of great storytelling .....
 
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