Wont You Be Mine by Carny

This Girl i just met is the one of my dreams,
Normally i'm flirting and i play my little schemes,
But this girl is so pure, my god she is so sweet,
You cans almost say, she swept me off my feet,
I like her so much, i like her alot,
Cupid is an asshole, because i've been shot,
Amara, your beautiful, no one can compare,
I would never ever hurt you baby.. that i swear.
I want you to know if you need a shoulder to cry on mine is open for you,
The day i say i love you, i want you to know i mean it, its true.
Baby, I'd trade the world for you....

This girl i just met is the one of my dreams,
Amara i want to Hold you in my arms in the moonlight as it gleams,
I want to kiss you goodnight,
And assure you everything will be alright,
Baby, i want to feel your soft lips pressed against mine,
with me, you wont have to worry about anything... everything will be fine,
So i want to ask you Amara, do you want to be free?
i mean to say.. If i asked you out, would you want to date me?

This poem is REALLY cheesey but i wrote it as a unique way of asking out this girl i met, surprisingly she didn't think it was creepy and she said yes =]

Tarna (76.29.211.223) -- Monday, August 16 2010, 06:14 pm

Ah first dates
This is a sweet way to ask a girl out.. Very unique idea Carny. This poems shows me the way a new love starts and the feelings grow from the very start..

FallenAngel (174.25.171.139) -- Tuesday, August 17 2010, 01:38 am

Remember
I remember the day I got this I had the most retarded smile on my face. It's amazing how my love for you has grown stronger since you sent me this poem. Baby you are my everything, baby i adore you!

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