Labyrinth
18 September, 2010
Author: Carny
staring into nothing
blinded by the dark,
hearing faint whispers
telling you of a journey you must embark,
Traveling through this twisted labyrinth
dark secrets are hidden along the path,
a puzzle with missing pieces
frustration shows its wrath,
questions go un-answered
like the pieces you'll never see,
lost in the mystery of this strange world
and fears you can never flee,
Traveling through this twisted labyrinth,
looking for something you may never find,
i know you've been to this hidden place
some people call it their mind...
------- Author's Notes -------
I wrote this a few years back when i was in a really weird mood,^_^ please comment yus? |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (205.188.116.135) -- Saturday, September 18 2010, 09:23 pm Jorge Luis Borges' "The Garden of Forking Paths." All that story talked about was labyrinths. The mind is indeed like that. There's always something going on up there. Thoughts are like traffic jams in the head. Great write Carny. |
| Carny (99.164.13.221) -- Tuesday, September 28 2010, 12:25 am Aww Thank you Meridian =] |
| Baby Brat (24.105.224.102) -- Tuesday, September 28 2010, 02:30 am DUDE I FREAKING LOVE THIS ONE! ITS AWESOME... YOU ARE A TERRIFIC WRITER! |
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