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Eclipse
21 December, 2010
Author: Shan

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There's nothing like the red moonlight
with the one you love the most in life
So close at side, hands held so tight
as waves stars ride the night.
I look right, you look left
as we stare into a love of depth.
As morning nears we drift to sleep,
for years this is a sight to keep

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Comments on this poem/writing:

anonymous (71.217.59.14) -- Tuesday, December 21 2010, 08:27 pm

Thanks

Thanks Shan! I'll remember last night too. Beautiful poem.
Leah (68.69.200.111) -- Friday, January 20 2012, 10:48 am

Lovely

i like that last line (for years this is a site to keep) there is nothing like remembering a speical moment with someone you care for.............well put, short but beautiful!
 
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