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Robot Man
20 February, 2011
Author: tommyg

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Stone man
Does no wrong
feeling warmth
Shaking the confusion off

Cold blood survived
Good man still die
Left behind this soldier
While they laugh until they cry

Happiness is gone
New world shadowed
Hides a new enemy
Fearing mirrors
Spirits don't exist
At a seance

Freestyles his misery
To catch their happiness
By surprise while being sucked
Into their world
He was no match
For his fate that awaited

------- Author's Notes -------

Don't mind my disturbing poems, quite frankly I feel like I have been through hell with myself and the world. Just wanted to know if there is anyone out there that needed to release the unfortunate side of life. I'm a good guy believe it or not, I don't know about the rest of the world though. My misery doesn't always like company.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meri (64.12.117.71) -- Thursday, June 9 2011, 04:31 am

Hey Tommy

I release all the time. If your Author's Notes means that you're lonely, then I can empathize. I've been there.

I guess some of the best poems don't have to make sense. As long as you feel a little relief for getting what's in you out, then that's all the matters.
 
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