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Bad Choices
10 March, 2011
Author: tommyg

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Bad choices
Left him alone
With no ears to hear
His words conspiring against him

The mirror distant
Not logical
His image not his own

He is someone else
And trying to figure out who
That place he will live
Until the truth says hello

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anonymous (71.217.42.236) -- Thursday, March 10 2011, 10:02 pm

Alone/w bad choices?

Sounds like a withdrawal man in prison or recluse in the image he sees. Bad choices now alone, with no one to hear. An image he is but not what he is. As he lives in this secluded solitary place. Hello! Nice poem!
 
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