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As The Sun Slowly Reclined
10 April, 2011
Author: Elizabeth Squires

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as the sun slowly reclined
in the red tinged west
a million dandelions
rose from their rest

they flitted and floated
on the south breeze
some even became entangled
in the front yard pine trees

a scattering of them
landed on the park pavement tiles
while others made their way
towards the Guyra miles

once the breeze had ebbed
and lost it's wind
the dandelions again took rest
in the red west tinge

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Stephen Harper (69.157.2.249) -- Monday, April 11 2011, 01:43 am

this reads like a poetic dream

well this reads like a poetic dream and as a very lovely technicolor vision playing in my head with the imagery of a music video.
 
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