The Chamber Zone
13 July, 2011
Author: Dino Hi
I enter the maze, that confuses my mind?
I focus way ahead, follow the path of others
Arrows pointing me left, then to my right
Like a blaze of yellow, a guiding line out
My mind thinks, I'm going in circles in a Chamber?
Common sense tells me, to keep moving forward
Yet in my peripheral view, I see others moving
Why are they going the opposite way, as I go forward?
First on my left, then a second later on my right
I focus forward, it's still happening over and over again?
No straight lines, but a Blane mess Chambers of zones
You're in the inside, of the peripheral view of confusion
Blane it on, The Chamber Zone
------- Author's Notes -------
Dedicated to Blane Chambers- July 4th, 2011 (Trail maker, GoPro film maker, Course coordinator, HMA volunteer) Kahuku,Hi. |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meri (205.188.116.135) -- Wednesday, July 13 2011, 05:43 pm Instead of typing "Blame," you put in his name. That's clever. I like that. Great dedication Dino. |
| Dino Hi (71.37.23.154) -- Wednesday, July 13 2011, 10:22 pm Wow? I didn't think I would get a comment on this one? Thanks so much Meri. Ha,ha,I used his name for "blame". I didn't know if anyone would catch that? Blane made this circle, twisty, confusing maze course for a dirtbike hare scrambles, that blew over 200 riders away with confusion, with his volunteer work, for the pleasure of others to enjoy. Mahalo for your comment. Have a great day! |
| Terrie* (98.224.73.21) -- Thursday, July 14 2011, 01:59 am This Is Brilliant!! It Really Resonates... I admire your Dedication and your Play on words.. Hope to read more.. Namaste * Terrie@}-'-, |
| Dino Hi (71.37.18.1) -- Thursday, July 14 2011, 10:11 am Namaste Terrie! I don't know if brilliant, but his name was easy to play on, but I do appriciate the compliment. Have a good night! Aloha! From Dino Hi. |
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