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Male Voice Choir
10 November, 2011
Author: Capricorn

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I lost the music deep inside
me, dormant since my father died
until I heard the miners sing
our homeland anthem’s rousing tide
of harmonies. I burned with pride.
Through passing years its timbre wrings
emotions still - this ancestry
forefathers have bequeathed to me.

------- Author's Notes -------

This is a revision of an old poem

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (66.103.62.153) -- Saturday, November 12 2011, 12:51 am

nice write cap

Sometimes Less is More, perfect for me to read and expressed your feelings really well great job Cap.
Capricorn (82.46.181.243) -- Sunday, November 13 2011, 12:09 am

Thanks

Thanks Barb - I like short poems, they can sometimes say just as much as longer poems.
 
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